Video feedback?

[natalie]

I made this video for a site I'm on, and I'm kinda iffy about it, but what do you guys think?

[Jack Kilford]

In the video you wrote"The Ministry has always kept a tight lid on the Department of Mysteries. They only accept the best minds into the Department of Mysteries. They dont have to answer to anyone." and I think in my honest opinion that you might say Department of Mysteries too much. I think that if you are talking about the Department of mysteries in the first sentence, you wouldnt have to mention it in the second. Maybe you could say someting like: "The Ministry has always kept a tight lid on the Department of Mysteries. They only accept the best minds into it." see? like without the second 'Department of Mysteries' I think that might make it flow better.


I love the part where the clip is going through the street and the dates change. That was really cool. And then when you transition that into the scene of the kid on the train, that was brilliant! I love it. The vampire diaries clips transition really well, and then when those change into the Milo Ventimiglia clip, its ok. But the next three I don't really like. I think it has to do with the quality of the clips and how the brightness and the contrast between them is very different. And I think that the Tom Riddle-in-the-chamber-of-secrets clip changed too fast into the one of the guy from Narnia (I could never remember his name, sorry). If you made that slower, or maybe transition it into the serendipity pic would be better. I think that Narnia guy would go better after the clip that goes after the one that's after the GG clip (the one with the girl in the patio or garden or w.e.)

Overall the video is good. I hope you dont mind what I said, I was just trying to be constructive.